Thursday, June 23, 2011



This story actually has two villains. They work as a pair but sometimes stories have a gang of villains and they are all the same character, or they can be a subset of the main villain. they are sometimes known as henchmen. As I said, this story has a pair of villains and this is how they disguise themselves to deceive the whole kingdom.

One day, a pair of jealous ogres came into the kingdom with a plan to make the princess miserable. The Ogres cast a spell on themselves. The spell changed the Ogres appearance so they looked like high officials from another land. They cast a spell on their voices so that everything the people heard them say would be accepted unconditionally. They came to the kingdom and told lies. They knew the most important part of the princess’s life was the children. They wove tales of the terrible disservice being done to the children. They must be rescued from the princess who was endangering them by imposing a false reality on them. They told the princess she was irresponsible and out of touch with her pretty clothes and silver spoons. The ogres sang a compelling tune and soon enough they were even able to push the princess into a deep dark hole.

Then we find out the true nature of their jealousy as they rub in their meanness.

She was still falling when they said laughing, “Take your silver spoon with you!” A shiny silver spoon fell into the hole after her.

Then she heard the shatter of glass as sparkling chips of mirror glittered and landed around her head. She could see glimpses of her anguish in the broken mirrors fallen reflections.

“Look in this mirror. This hole is a reflection of your self-loathing. Everything is your fault.” They were weaving a spell in her mind. The Ogres went into her closet and took out all the beautiful dresses that the princess was given when she was a child. The Ogres threw the dresses down into the hole. The gold and silver dressed were ripped apart by the roots and rocks that stuck out along the sides of the hole. The dresses became like webbing and strips of thread draping down the sides of the hole.

The Ogres, well satisfied, went away saying the princess had given her power away and jumped into the hole all by herself. The spell they cast on their voices worked so well that everyone in the kingdom believed that the princess was responsible for all that had happened.

When you write your story, you can realize that the bad stuff that happens is the key to pulling oneself out of the problem. The princess will gather her tools about her in the next installment.

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